Reached the end! I liked the pAcing of the story. 5 worlds , characters were rotated but maintained a fluidity relative to the plot lines. The ending was Appropriate without huge drama and ML stayed within plot development so there was a good feeling in the end. There were a lot of minor editing needed moreso in worLds 4,5 and end. If others readers want to know i paid about $60 USD to get through story.
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