Review Detail of Nmastte in With stands from jojo in onepiece(fck this this is dropped )

Kopie: Do you know from What persPective should i write this? 3 or 1? Or th style like in 10 heroes(3 but with too many descriptions and such)(my another popular original work)

Nmastte:personally I write to the 1st person and to give information that the main character does not have and which is important to the story I just change my point of view (another character who also discusses his allows to introduce a character earlier), for the writing style depends on the theme of the story and the length of the chapters, (10 heroes I don't know and I couldn't find by searching with google). ( I answer with Google translate, I'm lazy)

Kopie:Hows the chapter?

Nmastte:I'm going to be very frank lack of detail and emotions, for example describing the climate of the island how he made the ax or did he find the reeds how and the biggest problem is skipping lines after 2 or 3 lines , it's demotivating when you see the big block of text after scrolling the page (like on almost any other webnovel). It's better to describe too much than not enough it's the beginning you can adapt little by little. And on the positive side, I can't say too much about the lack of chapter to analyze and I have a horrible level in grammar. But it looks cool all the time. (if you want to write an original story, don't hesitate) (write with google translate because I write at 4:12 in the morning, do not hesitate if there is a mistake in what I wrote)

Kopie:Only saw this Comment. idk i dont realy have any motivation to write. Cause There is almost no peOple who realLy watch oN me except yoU

Nmastte:it's a paradox nobody looks at you if you don't invest yourself enough, trust yourself. ^^

Nmastte:I'm going to be very frank lack of detail and emotions, for example describing the climate of the island how he made the ax or did he find the reeds how and the biggest problem is skipping lines after 2 or 3 lines , it's demotivating when you see the big block of text after scrolling the page (like on almost any other webnovel). It's better to describe too much than not enough it's the beginning you can adapt little by little. And on the positive side, I can't say too much about the lack of chapter to analyze and I have a horrible level in grammar. But it looks cool all the time. (if you want to write an original story, don't hesitate) (write with google translate because I write at 4:12 in the morning, do not hesitate if there is a mistake in what I wrote)

Kopie:I might leave this plaTfOrm if what happens persists on this app

Nmastte:What is happening ?

Kopie:Super giFts they Just make this app unusEable

Nmastte:A migration on Royal Road UwU (or other) ?

Kopie:IL probbaly maybe write something in Some near time, i really have some menTal issues(not a disSease) and maybe i could express Them in the next Novel and It maybe would help me

Nmastte:

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