Review Detail of Bloodthirsty09 in Hollywood RE:CODED
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I just finished reading all the chapters and I must say I like your story very much, still there are some things that I must say :- 1.Dont give up on the novel and try to release more chapters in the beginning because many people don't read those stories which have less than 100 chapters. So keep at it and I am sure more people will pick up the story later. 2.Tone the flirting down a bit, I mean he doesn't need to flirt with every female he sees, looks like he is desperate... 3.I saw the harem tag, if you are thinking of making it harem I urge you not to because this is modern society and nobody really likes harem in modern society, shows that the MC is not loyal enough. 4.You are doing everything right apart form the things that I mentioned so keep writing and I assure you you will get more readers..
Hollywood RE:CODED
BukanOrang
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Wow thanks for the review, I try to finish the volume one but the daily problems, especially before new year always interupted me sorry For flirting, he just entered his puberty period and will adapt to it, worry not, men always had a chance to tease some girls lol but I'll try to reduce it as he grown up For harem, its a Nisekoi type harem, soft one and some flinging with some girls cuz, it's Hollywood, why not? but no polygamy, it's illegal in USA, but I'll try to write some literotica like stories for training purpose. I already thought the plot until early 2000, but how I put it in the paper IS the problem with time and energy Thx for your support!!
That's fine then I just didn't want to see the MC having relations outside the main female lead in a modern society novel. Just keep up the good work and don't be discouraged because as I said before not many people start reading novels with less than 100 chapters, but I am sure more people will start reading this after it crosses the 100 chapter mark because there really are not many novels out there like this, a novel without magic or supernatural elements. Honestly I am sick of those and have high hopes for this one
BukanOrang:Wow thanks for the review, I try to finish the volume one but the daily problems, especially before new year always interupted me sorry For flirting, he just entered his puberty period and will adapt to it, worry not, men always had a chance to tease some girls lol but I'll try to reduce it as he grown up For harem, its a Nisekoi type harem, soft one and some flinging with some girls cuz, it's Hollywood, why not? but no polygamy, it's illegal in USA, but I'll try to write some literotica like stories for training purpose. I already thought the plot until early 2000, but how I put it in the paper IS the problem with time and energy Thx for your support!!