the writing quality is great, but i can understand that for non native english speakers and such it may be confusing because of cultural differences and how they effect writing and reading, thus the writing could be a bit more descriptive at times or with more understandable authors notes updating stability ia great the story developes well, author uses unique and interesting ideas around several corners without making the book too overwhelming, the way a few words can greatly affect a readers mentality is one weapon to be used in writing and is used well here. character design could be more descriptive at times and use more eloquent or intricate wording. world background is interesting, ive only read to chapter 40 or so but it needs to be referenced or learned about some more eventually, if as i continue reading it goes into politics and world history that would be very interesting Over all, a great read
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