This story is great in the first few chapters and while there are a few grammar mistakes they do not take away from the story. This story has a lot of potential and seems like it will be a great read.
CamilleDirithyl
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LIKECamilleDirithyl:Of course. It will be the best story ever written and I will become immortal, infinitely rich, beautiful, the undisputed master of the world and almighty! Mouahaha
CamilleDirithyl:Of course. It will be the best story ever written and I will become immortal, infinitely rich, beautiful, the undisputed master of the world and almighty! Mouahaha