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I'm def having some problems with this. Ball tonight? Dress in one day? Thinking about screaming at people even though you already know you'll be moving? Getting a bit too ahead of herself for someone who didn't seem like that kind of character at first. Did the character change practically over night? I'd dislike to see it keep going down this road with a "realistic" world up till now but totally not realistic time frame, behaviour, or outcome, it's sad when this isn't even needed. Taking at least a few days to a week to train the girl how to behave like a noble before a debut would be smart, how the characters are currently acting is not smart.

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marichat_nettenoir
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This is a romance novel after all, and whatever happens here might not be realistic, but I'll keep your review in mind for further chapters. Thankss ❤️