Review Detail of Missrealitybites in The Maid’s Daughter

I have read the story up until chapter 5. The author has potential and will grow to write beautiful stories if she continues honing her skills by writing more consistently. The title is not catchy enough, but the synopsis works well to draw readers in. The story could use some improvements in consistency, sometimes the Author used 1st narrative in her 3rd person narrative, and a few mixed up pronouns (his/her), consistency on the anniversary (28 or 30?). The story is simple and the characters are predictable. We need more show than tell. However, there are no glaring mistakes that will hinder you from reading the story. The English is good too, considering it's not the author's first language. Overall, a good read for anyone who enjoys light reading.