Review Detail of Mistigan_Reaper in Ancient Tears BloodLine
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the novel is practically perfect in terms of grammar and slowly fleshing out power system. though what I do not like the repeated intrigue the mc keeps on facing for situations that could have been so much easily handled but couldn't becoz everyone keeps him in the dark until he actually faves the problem. why? coz apparently "he's not strong enough to handle the consequences" well and all his classmates with better backgrounds are? I seriously feel like such a smart mc is being forced by the author to develop into the stupid "as long as I'm strong enough all strategies are useless" person
Ancient Tears BloodLine
Aravind_S
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Hmmm, I understand your point. But I actually planned in this way for the first volume, Where MC is in dark about the world and clueless about his teacher's background. But now, the first volume is coming to and end after ongoing plot. In Second Volume, The MC will know lot of things, Unlike first volume, He won't be in back seat in the second volume and MC will act upon his own decison.
well, maybe I've read too much mtl novels so my standards of "good grammar" might be lower than yours lol. but anyways i feel like it's gotten progressive at the very least. Plus, instead of reading the overly exaggerated texts "optimised" through chatgpt, this is comparatively tolerable
RayanArcadia:Lol this guy is definitely the Author's alt. This guy says the grammar is perfect. Biggest joke of the century LOL. Even a 9 year old kid has better grammar than the author here. My opinion on this novel's grammar is that it's worse than mtl. Stop using alts my guy.
Hmm it does improve a small bit but there's no way you've read more mtl than I have. I've read like over 10k chapters of a single novel in mtl, start to finish. All in all, grammar was horrendous at the beginning. There's a lot of plot holes in the earlier chapters but the grammar slowly improves later on.
Mistigan_Reaper:well, maybe I've read too much mtl novels so my standards of "good grammar" might be lower than yours lol. but anyways i feel like it's gotten progressive at the very least. Plus, instead of reading the overly exaggerated texts "optimised" through chatgpt, this is comparatively tolerable