Review Detail of Littlepunnie in Last Heavenly Amazon

Hello! Its my first time reading the synopsis lol, and it's kinda intriguing making me read the chaps in one go. I've read the first 3 chapters of your book, and- the violence, the hatred, love seeking, etc. it moved me tbh. I found some errors in terms of capitalization, quotations and grammar. A little edit and this book will be a well polished gem. What I've noticed about this book is that, it doesn't stick on description? Yes, your approach was on the spot and I bet you hate dilly-dallying. But, I was hoping to read more, a little bit of the description ( well, it's still good anyhow some readers do not want to read a book with too much of those things ) I was taken aback with the story behind those abuse and pain that those parents inflicted towards Cesia, I found Cesia's quirk somehow like Kurapika's in Hunter x Hunter. ( His eyes turned scarlet/red whenever he is excited. From the Kurta Clan ). I've been trying to write gore for more than 2 months, but I don't think I've achieved this kind of 'torment' stuffs. Thus, I want to commend you about that. I hate her dad, or was he her dad? Nope. How dare he touch her! Thank God it was interrupted by her kick. lol