Review Detail of YawningBrain in Last Heavenly Amazon

Author I sincerely believe that your story has a lot of potential. You probably need some editing and grammar corrections. But I was really hooked from the first chapters. They conveyed so much, you just had the ability to draw your readers into the flow of the story and feel empathy for Cesia. Keep up the good work author! I can't wait for more releases.[img=recommend]