Review Detail of LucidBlue in Lucifer's Descendant System

I tried to give this story better stars than it is, but it's still one star in the end... The writing is bad. Extremely bad. Imagine a common fight where a single stab with a knife is needed. Bam. 2000 words. Why? There are needless explanations spammed over and over making one assume this was written for someone who has no idea what a town was, so there has to be an essay explaining what it is. That's the essence of this story. 100 x more words than what's needed just to make chapters cost more. Insane. If I could rate Writing Quality at negative 5, I would.