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Lacyan
LacyanLv21yrLacyan

Sorry for the late review! I finally can review this book. First off, I'd like to start by saying that the author's writing is pretty good imo. The wording of the sentences can still be improved upon though it's still enjoyable enough to be negligible. The plot is solid and we get to see lots of Intervar's thoughts. Though i've only read until chapter 5, but so far so good. If I have to comment on one thing—as this is my personal preference—is the lack of dialogue and the immersion of the novel. Where is Intervar situated exactly? What is Intervar's personality? Although the narration gives enough to explain his thoughts and general location, I would have preferred dialogue to fill that gap in—still, it's just my preference.

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There Were Two Brothers

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Hey, thanks for the review and don’t worry abt the timing- it’s all good! As for dialogue, I also feel like it fell flat, I was just never sure when I should have put it.