Review Detail of wintermist1994 in Isekai Absolute Copy and Online Shopping

If you really plan to draw portraits of your characters, you should create an account on patre**. I think it would attract a lot of people (at least me) because usually the authors only offer earlier access to the chapters there and you could additionally offer your own drawings (which, judging by the cover, would look great).

hello, thank you for the advice, but i still worried because i already sign a contract, is that not violating it if i upload some artwork in patreon? maybe i should ask the editor about it, and playing it save, thanks alot

This made me start reading this novel. I think it's great that you are enjoying writing this novel :D I will start now :)

i have a good news, the editor said its okay to upload the character design, environment illustration, and map!! but the bad news is, now i didn't have the time to draw it as my hand already full by drawing silent manga to submit for the yearly SMA competition, the deadline its still January, but as i drawing and writing at the same time, the manga progress became really slow T.T (you guys alr know, i draw slowly normally, and with writing to it became like snail loll) maybe i will started making patreon and uploading my illustration in it in January (hopefully) stay tune guys! i will informed it in my novel newest chapter if i already made it!

What is the difference between nsfw and r-18

R-18 is usually full H scene, while NSFW just slightly or partially H scene

this should be titled How to Crash the Economy and increase the Garbage with plastic and other modern waste in a different world

he could clear the garbage with magic in the fantasy world mate, and about pollution stuff, i could make the magic power clean in as long as i want it lol! i set the world after all. as you already see the genre is fantasy, the normal common sense mean a little here. about the world economy, who care, if he build his own country and sustain by himself? he will not disturb the world economy too much., maybe he could make the money flow again by buying some land and spend it to something again and not spend it all into his skill..

I don't understand how you can charge people money to read a novel where the English is this bad

did i force you to pay? you can leave it if you don't want to read it, why so salty? its not i forced you to read my shit, and i am not a rich kid so i still need money to survivein this ****ed up pandemy situation. why should i be hypocrite that write novel for free and shit, saying "I do this thing because i love to write and i don't need you guys money blablabla" do you think i not spending time here writing this novel? and yes! i need to fill my belly! did you have problem with that? and like people said, time is money, so i make people "WHO" still want to continue reading my novel to "APRECIATED" the time I spend to write this shitty novel of mine. good day~

And if you became enrage and feel the injustice, you could command to my 1 star review there. insult me as much as you want there, i have no problem with it. maybe after you insult me and stated how bad my novel "is" in there, people will not read my novel, and you became satisfied. and for me, i could read your insulting commend "If I have the mood" to keep me motivated and write better. its win-win situation. and i know i write poorly, as English is not my first language. and i just a NEET so i don't have high educational background. so, I'm sorry if my poor writing really annoyed you.

This reply of yours is absolutely pointless Considering you did not answer my question, do you insult yourself in the hopes of getting sympathy from other readers? Or is it in the hope that they drop their standards on quality? You never addressed my actual point which was nothing to do with your story being bad it was having to pay for chapters with the poor quality of writing in this novel. Are you honestly comfortable having your readers pay for your chapters in their unedited version? As an artist and a writer are you not ashamed to be locking that type of content behind a paywall? Or are you only doing this to make money? Also your last point about English not being your first language and you being a NEET those are just excuses for being lazy. If you are publishing in English then you have a duty as an author to make sure its readable. Here is a way of putting it into context, to unlock all of your chapters would need coins to the value of £5/€5/$7 to be purchased which is the price of a paperback best selling novel.

why should i get simpathy? to get more readers? is the reader care what my life is? i doubt it, the proof? isn't you the living proof here? are you care about my personal life? and one more thing, so what if i make this shitty novel of mine became premium? its not like all my reader really picky about the English like you anyway, and many reader said they enjoy my story so why not? novel is not all about the perfect language you stated before! i even enjoy the broken english translated novel by some machine translation. and novel is an art! as long as there is people could enjoy it there is no right and wrong! your shallow thinking that only judge an art from its surface is showing your shallow mindset and superior behavior! you expect people couldn't sell something that you stated as "A GARBAGE" I know my novel is far from perfect! but I PROUD SELLING THE STORY i delivered to the reader "THAT" still enjoying my story and "DIDN'T MIND" spending their money to read my novel! yes MR.ELITE i know really well what people like you really think like. all you think as garbage cannot be sell because its not at your "STANDARD" i have seen a lot people like you, in net or in real life! judgemental and always feel superior! that's what your kind looks like and if you want ask that my novel worth their money or not, why not asking them by yourself, I as the author just do my part here, writing and post it here. that's it. the one who decided is the market. and stop slander me pitying myself to get symphaty from the reader! if you don't know a shit about me you better not typing whatever you want there! this why the reason i hate playing social media, there is always these kind of people that spouted anything they want without noticing that what they are talking and judging to is a human. and for the standard of quality is already very low to begin with, what are you pointing this for? to mock me? as i already stated, this is my first "serious" novel! so stop expecting master-piece from beginner.

what unedited version?! i already edit it twice throughout the process!! this slandering again, if you not know anything stop with that judgemental thing of yours! if there is still mistake that's mean is my writing quality is bad that's all! and you didn't know how hard i work, stop with your slander! I have woken up everyday, and fix the chapter slowly with the low level English i could muster. you really love to spit on people hard work aren't you?

Not really, I also never said your story was bad I just said it was a bit shameless to charge readers when the English in the story is poor quality. I never poorly reviewed your story, slandered the content nor told any other readers not to read it I just merely stated my opinion on charging money. Do you think you are the only person who works hard in the world? other people work very hard for their money so it is only natural that they should expect quality for their coin no?

Hey man i haven't started reading the novel but you should work on your grammar in your own reviews because the first paragraph seems well written (all I've read so far) but your reviews give the impression that you can barely write properly. Hope the comment helps! I'll give a real review after reading a couple of chapters.

i didn't use grammarly when writing review XD, only used it when writing novel lol, its okay if the grammar is bad in this review so people don't expect a good grammar when they read my novel. because i don't want them to be disappointed after expecting too high hehehe

you just told me that i'm too lazy editing the novel, of course it will hurt me, ask mat(babbayaaga) here what the unedited chapter looked like before? he was the early reader so he know how bad the grammar was before, you know, i already fix the chapter many times when the reader give their advice and thing, and you tell me that i am too lazy to doing editing when i write one. if you are me, then what do you feel? and before releasing chapter(for the premium chapter) I always check the grammar many time with Grammarly and fix the word that i feel not fit like 2-3 times, and you said i release unedited chapter and draft, if you were me, how do you feel? now I busy with writing stock chapter as well as editing the free chapter so the reader could read it slightly better from the beginning, if people still tell that you are lazy after these much work and dedication in your work, if you are me how do you feel? if you not feel like being slandered than.... sigh....

Maaan you really like to twist peoples words around to justify you getting angry youre like a child. I actually never said you were too lazy to edit. What i actually said is that its lazy when you use excuses like “English is not my first language” or “im just a NEET so my english is bad” to justify your bad English. If your English is so bad then write in your own language! At least then the translations would make sense. Do people not write novels in your language or is it that its easier to make money out of English speaking people?