Review Detail of Qenam in Thomas Prest: A Simple Magician

It is just good. I can’t find any instantly noticable problems and the story flow and the world background is just fine. Even info dumps are enjoyable. The way i see it either this novel hits wrong spots for some people or they are addicted to cannon or/and cliche fanfic settings like if its dxd mc has to fuck at lest 3 girls in 15 chapters, devils are peace loving, serafall is childish and easy to fool or tease like she only lived 15 years not centuries and if its mcu fury is an allknowing spygod that knows everything supernatural aside from hydra and thanos, black widow is a killing machine shaped like a woman that only know spying, seducing, fucking and killing and other cliches. If i cut it short the only big problem with your story is it isn’t cannon and it isn’t cliche. People love fanfics because of cannon and people like almost everything because of cliches, they are cliches because majority likes them. I can’t see any problems but if you count possible problems than there are tons of them but i feel like you know them better then me or any other reader, if you dont want to keep writing for 3540535 chapters i think you should ignore some stuff like celestials, alien empires etc not specificly these but you can select what to ignore better than me.