Leaving a review because I thought of doing so~! š„° First of, writing quality! I like how vivid the narration of the book is! Other than that, I like how the author was formal in her narrative given the setting of the book. š Itās something I could learn from as a writer as well! Update stability, I have nothing to say. The author is doing well despite juggling writing other books in a day! She has been constantly updating without fail. šŖ For the story development, I find it better if the author would further elaborate the plot by making the story longer. However, as I could see, she has been doing a great job on how to keep the plot and its development going with the number of chapters she has posted! š¤© I like the character design in the story. š„° She has been doing well their development and it was not something abruptāmeaning it is well thought of along with the plans of her chapters. Well done! š Then lastly, world background. I appreciate the uniqueness of the authorās background for the story. Being a fantasy writer as well, I could see the efforts she has put into in weaving the world of the story for the characters she has created. š¤© Keep up the good work and continue on creating such wonderful works, AteJanz! š„³
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