Review Detail of SolAce in Sin of Kin
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A story I could binge for if author would be so kind as to post more. Our mc is a devil on the outside but an angel on the inside, yet she isn’t naively innocent to the point it is annoying. She has her own character that bursts out of the screen and the intellect to carry her through danger. Everything is nigh perfect except for a repeating grammar issue. Grammar errors are in everyone’s books, but I’ve noticed you replaced commas or periods with ellipses in dialogues and sometimes in paragraphs, which is not so good in the long run. Would suggest to correct at least some since it does bother me a bit. All in all, splendid potential that makes me crave for more. Keep up the good work, Author !
Sin of Kin
Houraji
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Thanks a lot for reading my humble story, really-really appreciate it and glad you enjoyed it. Then about your advice about ellipses I think I do use it too much. I just learn there are rules for ellipses as well, for example APA (only use ellipses if the words are 40 or more), then MLA (must be 4 lines long to use ellipses) then Chicago (100 or more) etc. Thank to you I find something I cam learn. I thought this (...) didn't have such a meaningful rules or some sort. It is you who have opened my third eyes. xD Once again, I thank you.
I would usually recommend to limit ellipses to dialogue, as in when the character wants to say something but swallows it back. Usual sentences should end with a period.
Houraji:Thanks a lot for reading my humble story, really-really appreciate it and glad you enjoyed it. Then about your advice about ellipses I think I do use it too much. I just learn there are rules for ellipses as well, for example APA (only use ellipses if the words are 40 or more), then MLA (must be 4 lines long to use ellipses) then Chicago (100 or more) etc. Thank to you I find something I cam learn. I thought this (...) didn't have such a meaningful rules or some sort. It is you who have opened my third eyes. xD Once again, I thank you.
SolAce:I would usually recommend to limit ellipses to dialogue, as in when the character wants to say something but swallows it back. Usual sentences should end with a period.image
Houraji:Roger that. It is one of my bad habits xD I'll try my best to change it (↑ω↑)