Review Detail of Tanya_Winters in SINFUL THIRST

A sassy protagonist! The story is set in a historical period where there are still nobles and the main character is the daughter of a wealthy noble. What stood out to me the most is the narrative style. The protagonist talks in a sassy tone and addresses the reader directly which made the reading experience quite delightful. There are some small grammatical mistakes: the "I" pronoun in lowercase which needs to be in uppercase, spelling should be "etiquette", and run-on sentences that can be made into shorter sentences. Just fix it a bit and the story will be flawless. The story is easy to follow and the narrative of the sassy protagonist is really interesting. This story has great potential. Nice work, author! 😊