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Review Detail of kotarou28 in The H.P.S. (Hentai Protagonist System) [Old Version]

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kotarou28
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Don't waste ur time the mc is a fucking beta and let Anna be a whore like the original history. There's a stupid time skip without explanation (mc start a 10 old then he is 16 an automatically get cucked)

The H.P.S. (Hentai Protagonist System) [Old Version]

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Alinterelins
AlinterelinsLv5Alinterelins

And... What your thoughts about that 'Yurika Ichijou' girl my fellows? Because original is holy sh1t gods forsaken netorare. Like classical ABC Netorare. And i can hardly imagine how can she be 'rescued' to mc's harem. Btw. Don't you think there're too many females with similar sounding names (Yuria, Yurika, Yariko). 3 out of 6...

LordOfLaziness
LordOfLazinessLv5LordOfLaziness

anna? who is anna?

SabertoothX15
SabertoothX15Lv13SabertoothX15

Who is anna??.....is the MC a beta and a fucking retard??

Afonso_Aaron
Afonso_AaronLv5Afonso_Aaron

ﹰAnna didn't became a whore cuz Mc was always watching her to make a move when her needs became incontrolable.

noobageddon_
noobageddon_Lv13noobageddon_

Wow, you survive the deletion process. lol

Venom_God
Venom_GodLv12Venom_God

Lol he watched her jack off infront of other people, i mean she did not get ****ed but she was there jacking off to other people...i mean he let that happen come one..how can u let that happen..mc is passive

Afonso_Aaron:ﹰAnna didn't became a whore cuz Mc was always watching her to make a move when her needs became incontrolable.
Croissance
CroissanceLv4Croissance

Thanks man you've just saved me

Venom_God:Lol he watched her jack off infront of other people, i mean she did not get ****ed but she was there jacking off to other people...i mean he let that happen come one..how can u let that happen..mc is passive
LaurentCross
LaurentCrossLv13LaurentCross

Thanks for saving my time

Uncle_Sheogorath
Uncle_SheogorathLv4Uncle_Sheogorath

Indeed hentai is infested with NTR. If you want NTR just watch hentai.

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Overkill
OverkillLv14Overkill

... the novel tell you directly it a hentai... you expect a decent logic?

Kyubikn
KyubiknLv4Kyubikn

u just saved me from this mess. I would rather watch hentai instead if Anna is following the same old route.

Pyoug
PyougLv4Pyoug

what?

Overkill:... the novel tell you directly it a hentai... you expect a decent logic?
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Darth_Kitsune
Darth_KitsuneLv4Darth_Kitsune

Fellow men of culture, who is Anna and is there actually more NTR then he lets his girls to jack off to someone while he watches, cuz this feels like passive NTRing.

Lord_Darkkan
Lord_DarkkanLv1Lord_Darkkan

thanks for your sacrifice

Tmii
TmiiLv13Tmii

SaVing lifes with this comment DIdnt go past chap 1 if therez passive ntr **** that im put

Akabane
AkabaneLv6Akabane

2 weeks later we still don't know who Anna is...

AnshinSaltz
AnshinSaltzLv1AnshinSaltz

Anna is black haired girl in the hood

viloh
vilohLv6viloh

in the original hentai , the MC , anna's step bro stalked her to the club where she jerked off infront of people ( everyone was doing something at that point ) he wanted to get blackmail evidence on her to have power on her , turned out she became his exclusive bitch when he f*cked her there was no ntr , his second sister is similar to the onlyfans thots out there , he f*cked her and she became his cosplayer only , his step mom used to be a model who was always f*cked stupid , he f*cked her as well and she became his third *** sleeve there's no NTR in this hentai , only thicc sexy b*tches

Darth_Kitsune:Fellow men of culture, who is Anna and is there actually more NTR then he lets his girls to jack off to someone while he watches, cuz this feels like passive NTRing.
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Darth_Kitsune
Darth_KitsuneLv4Darth_Kitsune

Now as I know there is no active NTR I will read it, thanks fellows men of of culture.

viloh:in the original hentai , the MC , anna's step bro stalked her to the club where she jerked off infront of people ( everyone was doing something at that point ) he wanted to get blackmail evidence on her to have power on her , turned out she became his exclusive bitch when he f*cked her there was no ntr , his second sister is similar to the onlyfans thots out there , he f*cked her and she became his cosplayer only , his step mom used to be a model who was always f*cked stupid , he f*cked her as well and she became his third *** sleeve there's no NTR in this hentai , only thicc sexy b*tches
Venom_God
Venom_GodLv12Venom_God

Lol anna did get ****ed in the club just saying(in the original) but his other sister was a virgin

Darth_Kitsune:Now as I know there is no active NTR I will read it, thanks fellows men of of culture.
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Venom_God
Venom_GodLv12Venom_God

Anna did get ****ed in the original..

viloh:in the original hentai , the MC , anna's step bro stalked her to the club where she jerked off infront of people ( everyone was doing something at that point ) he wanted to get blackmail evidence on her to have power on her , turned out she became his exclusive bitch when he f*cked her there was no ntr , his second sister is similar to the onlyfans thots out there , he f*cked her and she became his cosplayer only , his step mom used to be a model who was always f*cked stupid , he f*cked her as well and she became his third *** sleeve there's no NTR in this hentai , only thicc sexy b*tches