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Hey, just a note for those of you who want to read. Please read carefully, so that you don't feel disappointed because your time is wasted reading this story. 1. Is this some kind of story with reincarnation or going back in time? No, this story is just about an ordinary guy who discovers that there is a game that can be used to make money. 2. Does this story use something like a system? I don't know what kind of system you're expecting, I'm using things you can find in normal RPG games. 3. What about the MCs? He's neither good nor bad, I'd like to write him as a realistic human, only doing things that benefit him, but at least he can still sympathize. 4. Is there romance? Yes, and because I love it, there's probably a lot of romance in this story. And there will also be more than just the main couple to enjoy in this story. 5. Is there a Harem? No, although I actually like it too, but I don't use it because the setting of this story is still in the normal world. And also I don't want any female characters to get hurt because the MC can only be with one girl. (And to be honest, writing a good and balanced harem is hard.) 6. About the plot, there might be some things that are a little strange or don't make sense. But remember that this is just a fantasy story, and it is also possible that you will find a lot of plot holes in this story. So just understand, and I will also try to improve more every time. 7. Regarding writing, I admit that I am bad at writing things. Moreover, English is not my first language, and I am still learning it. So if there are errors in writing or grammar, you are free to give criticism or input. Whether you want to criticize bluntly or subtly, I will gladly accept it. 8. And also for each chapter, it will contain an average of between 1.300 to 2.000 words. Warm regards, Alkapa

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