This is a fairly early review but so far its a pretty good read. The one major problem I see is the author is writing from a 3rd person point of view but then accidentally uses a 1st person point of view. It’s incredibly jarring and the only gripe I have. When the narrator is summarizing whats happening it shouldn’t seem like the MC is speaking.
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