Review Detail of V1ce in Zack Fair on Remnant

This is a early review so things may improve or degrade from her but who can say. So far character interaction has been very well done while most (not all) characters have been portrayed rather accurately. Updating has been consise but since this fic is still early that may change. Chapter length is great as well. Some characters aren't portrayed as well as others but story progression isn't hasty and a slow build is always a plus in my books. If the quality stays consistent then this piece will be on is way to a 4 or 5 star in no time.