Review Detail of RJMidnight in Lucifer's horrors circus

I’m a sucky for horror. And I got to say I enjoy your story and how you describe the MC and what he is dealing with because of his appearance. It really keeps a reading hooked amd follow through with his inner turmoil. The problem I have is your grammar. It is not bad and does not throw off the story, but you keep forgetting to add an ending punctuation for some dialogue and forgetting to capitalize the word after the dialogue(only do it if the dialogue doesnt end in a comma). And your paragraphs are long, maybe you should put some spaces between them. Other than that, your story is really good and I enjoyed the chapters you have so far. Keep up the good work!