Review Detail of daydreamtowrite in Lucifer's horrors circus

Hello, Author! Writing Quality: I really, really think you beat me in terms of describing what's happening in your story. I find it difficult to write specific descriptions in my story and you told in your Author's Note section that English isn't your first language, and I'm so impressed. I think the only constructive criticisms I have, are that you should break your paragraphs into three, four, or five sentences and use quotes (") instead of (—) when a character is speaking. Story Development: I can't spoil here, but you should read this hidden gem. It has potential, so what are you waiting for? Character Design: You can distinguish the identities, so it's not difficult to understand who's who. Updating Stability: I don't really care about when you will update, so you should take your time. I believe rushing an update will produce half-baked results and don't hesitate to rest if you're tired! World Background: You should read it and all I can say is, it's impressive if you're interested or a fan of Horror and Thriller (or if you just want to suffer lol). I hope you'll find success in this book! It's going to stay in my library, so I'll continue to read it.