Review Detail of RazorIsSharp in Lucifer's horrors circus

A Nice start! I like the story overall, and I like Jonah as the main character. Obviously, his circumstances are sad, but I won't spoil it for any other readers. However, just some warnings... Nearly all authors won't have paragraphs over 5 sentences just because it's hard to read after that. For dialog, use quotation marks " --- " and for thoughts use single quotes ' --- '. Anyways, curious how things will go in the story. I noticed a huge difference between chapter 1 and chapter 4, so try and keep going in that direction!