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UndeadBeing
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The getting lost was funny, then he became superman... He pulled a kamehameha and I couldn't after that, I feel like if i read more I'll die of cringe. The fact he yelled kamehameha also played a part, but yeah I read alot of qidian novels so the grammar wasn't bad for me, character kind of becomes kage level in 4 chapters, fixes his getting lost in 3, and forced teuchi to do things so he can master them in 2. The grammar horrible, writing is 1, story development is 1 since he's basically ginna be hokage level in 10 chapters at most, character design is 2 since he makes me cringe enough to overlook any of the good parts. Mc barely knows how to get home much less the situation about the world, and he didn't even watch naruto so we get nothing. Reminder that this is only in the 4 chapters I could bear to read. stability is always a 3 unless the story is great enough

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