Review Detail of Dieudonner_17 in (DC) Lost

Ok save for some wrong grammar and a few inconsistencies 1) he should not be keeping up with shazam when he has hardly been exposed to sunlight(like how long😂😂😂it was not even a day) Sans this its ok some inconsistencies with character development here and there Shazam is goofy cos hes a kid but not that goofy(he tries to act like an adult when hes you know shazam just the childish tendencies show themselves once in a while)🤷🏽 Booster gold was portrayed perfectly The other justice members, they are hardly even seen to check their development but hey its your first fanfic so🤷🏽 You did good