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Adobo
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Writing Quality 5 stars- So far I haven't found any problems regarding grammar.Story Development 3 stars- I don't know why, I just find it annoying. Some chapters seem so forced.Character Design 3 stars- no need to explain, I'm already at chapter 400 yet the development of the MC's mental health...Updating Stability 5 stars- no need to explain.World Background 4 stars- ...

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Earth's Greatest Magus

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Enyo_9753
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Writing Quality 5 Stars?I am currently at chapter 74 and my english is also not very good but i feel like there is atleast 1-2 mistakes per chapter.Words are not writen wrong but he sometimes forgets to put "the" before a word and thats a little annoying but i am somewhat of a perfectionist (as in i try my best to not make any mistakes but they happen nonetheless) in such matters so maybe it is easier for to find and bothers me more than other people.