Great beginning sequence, and incredible world, but after 100 chapters, I do not agree with the characters and their relationships with MC. I don't care about Morgan, and I wish you didn't add new things and places and people all the time. I've stopped caring about the new characters, and wish for a better explained magic system / rehaul of Emerson character / no mixing in modern world. just give us meaningful interactions and good progression. dragon inside fey bloodline 4 elements but B secret magical more effective core access to tons of energy rich enviourments but still wussy and friends are still better but that's OK because he's superstars unless its fighting. man, this story is all over the place and the valance feels off and fall apart. don't do too much man! stop adding new stuff at every corner, and stop with 4 girls swooning over mc.
Avan
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LIKEAvan:thanks for the comment actually all character were carefully place. and you will find later on that they will start to become important for the MC journey. but yes you need to have the patience to read the story. i can only say most reader find it better after the second volume. it is just the origin story that you red so far
thanks for the comment actually all character were carefully place. and you will find later on that they will start to become important for the MC journey. but yes you need to have the patience to read the story. i can only say most reader find it better after the second volume. it is just the origin story that you red so far