This story is definitely worth a read, the characters are well thought out and have their own depth to them, the world continues to grow with each chapter, and the split between the mortal world and magical world is an interesting one! The story starts off a little slow and at first Emery is a little gullible but he’s a kid and it’s believable! If you finish up all the free chapters I’m sure you’ll want to read more, I look forward to the continuous expansion of the magic cultivation and the world you’ve built
Avan
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LIKEI'm not going to be one of those people that rates your story 1 star after reading the synopsis, but at least fix the grammar in it. I'm probably not going to read your story because of it, but I wanted to let you know that it turned me away from the story.
Avan:thank you for kind review. glad you like it