Review Detail of Wolf9 in Earth's Greatest Magus
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Decent novel, with good story and world building. Reason i dropped it was the personality of the character. He is one of the few characters i cant stand reading about. I found him very annoying up to the point he met the dragon, then it got a alright for a while, then went bad after the fight with the bandits. Then i dropped it after his second teleport to the academy. Right before his second recall one of his friends gets captured, and about to be tortured and killed according to the knight, and he the moment he enters the academy he acts like nothing happened. He greets his friends there like usual,thinks about his plans on how to get stronger. I'd expect him to at least try and get teleported back to try and save her or at least not act like she was never captured.
Earth's Greatest Magus
Avan
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Wolf9:I wasn't expecting the mc to be able leave the academy, but he should feel bothered about it and not act like nothing happened. A chapter, with him trying to go back and be rejected for whatever reason or to be seen as worried about her would have made tremendous impact on character development.
Well the chapter afte he teleported, he talked the with his friends like nothing happened, the next he calmly went the to class and then he focused on finding teamates xd
Avan:there are a few chapter actually, thanks for the review though
could you probably missread one chapter? i thought half of the chapter 121 is all about him sulking, and he has been distant and change a few chapter afterwards.. its not until chapter 150 he return to his oldself. she was even mention if a few cahpter afterwads.
Wolf9:Well the chapter afte he teleported, he talked the with his friends like nothing happened, the next he calmly went the to class and then he focused on finding teamates xd
Maybe he is not his self for a good amount of time after, i dont know i haven't read further than 3 chapters after the recall. I reread chapter 121 and indeed half of it is about him sulking. BUT that half chapter describes 5-10 minutes after his recall. Maybe it's just me and i misinterpreted the chapter wrong. Anyway, this is just a personal opinion and shouldn't discourage you as you've done a great job in the rest of the elements. Keep up the good work!
Avan:could you probably missread one chapter? i thought half of the chapter 121 is all about him sulking, and he has been distant and change a few chapter afterwards.. its not until chapter 150 he return to his oldself. she was even mention if a few cahpter afterwads.
Yeah from the moment he leaves school the first time till the second recall, i don't think i found any logic behind MC's decisions and behaviour. Even small things, like how he talked to the dragon after it helped him with his cultivation were frustrating to read.
James_Schiavone:im mad to even why he walked up and asked them he should had know after granny hes not that strong. also he kinda knew something was up