Review Detail of Zentorv in Celestial Chance

Personally, I think confidence and morale are critically important. I placed this review here just to reflect that. As of now, the story isn't really face-paced. Ideally, I think it would be better to increase the pace but I also don't want to compromise too much on the details or risk creating plot-holes. I do re-read and check things to minimize the plot-holes as much as realistically possible. I also take constructive criticism very seriously. I will try to incorporate every comment that seems feasible and beneficial for the story's growth. Overall, this is a long-term project with a lot of potential.