Why wish for Nine Tail and Ten Tail's ? It's ridiculous since the ten tail's is the fusion of all of the tailed beast and Kaguya herself, second Uchiha bloodline and hashirama cell's ? Just ask to be an Uchiha with a sage body or even just an Otsutsuki BUT THAT'S NOT THE MOST IDIOTIC THING HERE, the Tenseigan with a sage chakra mode would have been more useful inside DxD, another thing just ask to have menma Inheritance aka appearance, technique/power and knowledge which means having the black Kyubi... Sorry but these are TO ME the most logical choice to make your story good
Menma_Uzumaki
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LIKEHey ,I just precised it's MY opinion not one for everyone like I said it was more logical to me ,and it's also my taste not a general one another things is my review isnt that bad I gave him a 50/100.
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Your story is good but these were just Illogical (to me) that's why I didn't give you a good or bad review, don't take it to heart I wasn't trying to hurt you or something like that ,I just gave you my honest opinion
Menma_Uzumaki:Thanks for the review I will try to Get Better
Diffool:Your story is good but these were just Illogical (to me) that's why I didn't give you a good or bad review, don't take it to heart I wasn't trying to hurt you or something like that ,I just gave you my honest opinion
Diffool:Hey ,I just precised it's MY opinion not one for everyone like I said it was more logical to me ,and it's also my taste not a general one another things is my review isnt that bad I gave him a 50/100.