Review Detail of LPummill3 in In Naruto: Reborn with Talent

I dont know about the rest, but for me, i dont mind his rate of growth or evem that Konan is stronger. What my issue is that they ‘suppossedly’ shared an equal amount of soul between each other, yet he gained LITERALLY NOTHING from her except higher chakra reserves? Even that wouldnt be too much of an issue if Konan only received ONE of his talents (even if diminished) but she received ALL THREE. That makes no sense and is basically just the Author saying ‘she won the lottery jackpot while you won your money back, be happy with that’. Its so forced just to keep him from growing strong quickly. sigh. but whatever.

And he also hinted that this is going to happen again with his future women, they are all going to take their talents without giving him anything, they just need to do a yuri harem and expel him ...

Honestly, i dropped the story just two chapters after the one this comment is posted in. I tried, i really did, but this story just doesnt work for me. His other story where he is the Kaminari Daimyo’s second son was much better to me because it made far more sense. I would recommend reading that story, but this one.... really not for me.

but according lei in comments on this story 2 of their love interests become bisexual and start dating each other.

If your talking about the Kaminari Daimyo Son story, then yes, two of his harem members become lovers themselves. But that isnt a problem to me since they still hold their love for the MC to a higher level than eachother.

Those are the kinds of things I don't like in a harem novel, even if MC agrees it feels like NTR so I couldn't read that novel.

Eh, if they completely stopped loving him, prioritized each other over him to an unnatural degree, or was with another guy instead of girl, i would agree. but if its with another girl, its kind of hot, especially if they are willing to do threesomes (which they are). but i can see your point.

do not believe these criticisms they are just a group of idiots who do not look at the big picture, ignoring how broken the protagonist's abilities will be when he finishes growing up.

The big picture is; the soul fusion is useless, there is no need for Konan to be that OP, she was already OP as ****, the MC was already OP as ****, hell, every future waifu is probably already OP as Fuck. Why would you do that soul bullshit? Btw, Naruto World already have some laws for souls, laws based on real life cultures, that’s why every popular story have almost the same meaning for souls.

man, if you have an anime character by your side that in itself is op and this character loves you to the point that it is a yandere and you can make it more op, wouldn't you? it would be stupid not to And what happened to the souls, it's a fucking fanfic

If you were dating a girl and she was sleeping with another girl and has feelings for said girl how is that not ntr, she literally is having an affair lol

Eh both of them his harem member tho (according to his words) so i think it's not Ntr, Because the two women in other words are still his lover's (Harem). To me it's the same as 'Oyakodon', what's different here is that they are not mothers and daughters with the love of parents and children, but love like a man and a woman. that's the perfect example for both woman and the MC. If one of the women wasn't the MC's Harem but another woman or another OC I would agree with you that it is definitely Ntr.