Review Detail of Mytaw in Attack on Titan: The Peace I Desire

I don't usually write reviews but I guess I liked this novel a bit too much Writing Quality 3/5: While, it isn't the worst by far, the first chapters are quite strange. One of the most noticeable problems is the verb conjugation but bear with me, that's not the only one. Besides basic mistakes that could be fixed by simply using Grammarly, the writing itself sometimes sounds empty, for instance when the titans invade the wall it feels like the author is simply stating a fact, instead of an emotionally heavy moment that demarks the"beginning of the end" Another thing that happened 2 or 3 times is unnecessary information occupying about half a chapter, like, who the **** wants to know about cannons? it should have taken some research but 8 paragraphs of info about cannons? and to finally end this part of the review, the author uses 3 points "..." way too much and without any apparent meaning, like, 8 per sentence. Stability of Updates 5/5: Pretty good, nothing much here Story Development 4/5: Pretty good, although it took some time to finally set up the story. Character Design 3/5: The protagonist kinda feels like wish fulfillment, an ex-hitman who for some reason got reincarnated in AOT without any prior knowledge about it. The setting is cliche and not really developed, beyond "he kills bad guys and likes kids" World Background 4/5: It's an AOT fanfic, nothing much to see here beyond a good representation of what happened Although I went a little hard on it, I do really like this fanfic and it's not like there is another AOT fanfic this good.