Review Detail of kenkan in New World - A New Beginning
Review detail
Hey guys, Author here. I just wanted to leave a few words regarding this story of mine: First and foremost, the book is inspired by The Beginning After the End by Turtleme. This beginning of this story mirrors TBATE, and if you've read the work, then you'll immediately recognize the plots and situations. Both stories obviously diverge later on, but you can expect the first few dozen chapters to be extremely similar. I'm also trying to improve my writing with this book. I'd say I did a decent job at checking for mistakes, but if you happen to find any, or just happen to read a sentence that doesn't sound right, just let me know. I always try and correct mistakes I missed. Pacing is also something I struggle with, so any tips on how to go about adjusting and setting the speed of events would be much appreciated. Here are also some questions I've gotten: Is this story a harem? - No. Is there R-18 content? - No. Is the story perfect? - Fuck no. Obviously, the last one isn't a question I've gotten, but please don't start reading this story expecting some modern masterpiece. I'm just a simple author who's trying to write their very first novel. That's all I've got for now. I really do hope you enjoy my story if you decide to try it out. If you have any questions, just ask away or ask me on discord. (Link will be in the synopsis of the story) Thanks for everything :)
New World - A New Beginning
kenkan
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DarkDesire:One question. Would you be making the book as sadistic as TBATE? Keep beating down the MC at every corner?
TyphonWyllt:Wil there be R-18 content in the future? (Just picture me making a Scottish mmhmm face with my chin out)
DarkDesire:One question. Would you be making the book as sadistic as TBATE? Keep beating down the MC at every corner?
TyphonWyllt:He was isn’t going to get his core destroyed then maie another one like the aether core right because it just makes it strange unless he still has his original core and can use magic
Inspiration is fine, but it just seems like a straight up attempted fan-fiction to me. (My memory is really bad, so it may not be the case at all).
Mathro:Uhhh.... Where does it actually diverge? I have read TBATE, and while my memory isn’t the best up to chapter ~80 it seems the same. It just looks like a reskin. I may be wrong, but if they really haven’t diverged then why is it under premium during those chapters?
I’ve only read the comic of TBATE, so everything after the beginning of the school arc I wrote without using TBATE as an ‘aid’. I’m aware that there’s a war in TBATE as well, but I really don’t think I’ve been following the same route. I would never lock parts of the book that I believed to be a reskin of another novel.
Mathro:Inspiration is fine, but it just seems like a straight up attempted fan-fiction to me. (My memory is really bad, so it may not be the case at all).
