The story is good so far with the setting and the ideas that it gives for you to imagine it. I hope you keep writing! >o< If you want us to point out grammar errors then feel free to respond back since I don't want to point it out without permission to do so.
Blackcat96
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LIKEBlackcat96:Thank youu for your review. I am so happy, By all means, pls do so... It will surely help me to improve my grammatical error. (♡˙︶˙♡)