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Not bad. However, there are some problems. Firstly to much filler like rewriting word for word things from the canon books, like the sorting ceremony song etc. Don't do it! Its a waste of our time I doubt anyone reads it. It only fills the word cap. Fillers are never good. Moreover making OP mc is good but only when it makes logical sense. So for example mc in the first year learning all the books from the library is just silly. Completely breaks realism even with an eidetic memory. Keep mc strong for his age/level but don't make him a god. So no dumbledore/Voldemort power range while still in school. Maybe when he is in his final year it could be possible somehow.

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