Review Detail of John_sins1 in The Bloody Falcon

You are doing a great job so far!👌

I like the fact that the fics vary all are reborn as targaryens jon or an oc, I like the idea of ​​the arryn, of course they do not have much, but it has potential besides not having many enemies as a lannister or stark would have Good starting point, the first thing you should do is establish yourself as a figure in the north, get alliances, then deal with the troublemakers, the BOLTONS etc. During the time of the alliances, he should marry, preferably with someone from the north, or with a savage of great authority like VAL There are already too many fic with danny as wifu, they have my balls full

Promising Fanfic! 👌 Eagerly waiting for more!😁😁😁😁

If you plan to update like that then see you at the 100 chapter .

keep it up man. looking forward for chapters

I like the story I can't wait to see where it all goes and I find the vale and interesting and unique starting point!