Review Detail of TGKxNasty in A Dragon's System of Evolution

I like this book but he dosen't post enough an this story went bye pretty fast but I really like it the main character is like able an the story line but you should slow down you could really milk this book with all you gave it it would've been cooler if it went bye a little slower then it would be easier to make longer chapters an pages to instead of having to non stop think