Review Detail of Dasteriosu in Night Shifters

I must say that the quality of the writing itself is way superb that what I usually see on Webnovel in General. The grammar inside of the story isn't messy either, but that's the end of it. Other than how the author's idiomatic words and her good writing style, it's not really a good story. The author seemed trying too hard on world-building but forgot to add the plot inside of her story. As far as I've read, a total of six chapters, I really couldn't know what was going on nor feel immersive in the world itself. The author focused too much on the world background, but forget the story itself. The only thing I can conclude is that the plot is about a virus or something, other than that, I had no idea. The way that she writes makes the story more confusing as I read further and further. The first chapter doesn't have any correlation with the second chapter, at least from what I've read. It felt like I was reading fantasy, but the idea was thrown out of the window as soon as I've read the first chapter. Overall, good storytelling, but not immersive.