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Review Detail of Goto_Beats in A Guide to Kingdom Building ( Me Reincarnated 365 x)

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I am at Chapter 85 ... I just want the author to know that their are certain Chapters which is not at all needed or the contents of the chapters could have been shorted. Certain chapters is entirely composed of a single conversation between two entities ,eg the Campfire chapter or the four long chapters where the goddess shows the MC about his past , which definitely could have been shorted . Author most of us uses our passes to open the chapters , cause it's not free , And those chapters has to be worthwhile ... of course you can definitely give vivid discriptions and details and I absolutely love it ... But it's not like Chyralisis where chapters are free of Cost ... You are selling the book dear author... Gotta keep that in mind .. To everyone .. This is a good book with good English and the details of characters and world background is given vividly ... But this story is verrrrrrrrry slow paced ... Sometimes you will lose your cool as I did ... sometimes you will feel that more the Chapter is good but not worth your buck ... One can give it a shot ... And for the author.. If you want your Novel to be of High ranked , to get popular, to be acclaimed by your audience and get good pay for your work ... Please see the Chapters is worth the bang .. Once again it's a good novel .. just certain chapter messes up the Vive ..

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A Guide to Kingdom Building ( Me Reincarnated 365 x)

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I appreciate your review and will take this to heart. I've been working on that for quite sometime now. Thanks!