Review Detail of kemo_omer in A Guide to Kingdom Building ( Me Reincarnated 365 x)

I actually liked how well written the grammar and the word choice were. I also liked how realistic this is. The only thing that I don't like is the mc himself. why? reason one, he got kicked out of the reincarnation circle because of love... like come on. Reason two, his personality since he is too kind and too naive. dude he hed reincarnation 360 times and he hed seen a king touring children and women, yet he did nothing but he still couldn't hold himself when an elf is getting raped. 🙄🙄