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Review Detail of Malignant in A Guide to Kingdom Building ( Me Reincarnated 365 x)

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Malignant
MalignantLv133yrMalignant

This review is written after reading the latest chap at this moment. (Chapter 7) I'm not the type of person who casually gives a half-hearted review to please others and I'm brutally honest about it... Perhaps... Anyway, the writing quality is quite good and there were no major mistakes that could take one away from their reading immersion aside from a few tense shifts. But the latter can be worked on through editing. 5 for story development. There were no forced interactions and everything seemed logical so far. Just that, the gods felt so weak in my opinion. Characters aren't fleshed out yet and this might be because of the lack of chapters. This includes the MC himself. <- This opinion may change depending on how the author approaches this point. Update Stability 5 Aside from the characters, the setting wasn't properly explained yet. Again, this might be because of the lack of chapters. But the good thing is that I can see development in this area. All in all, this book has the potential to reach top 100 for originals (based on my experience). Only of course, if the book manages to get its well-deserved attention.

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A Guide to Kingdom Building ( Me Reincarnated 365 x)

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Thanks for your in-depth review! I will do my best to give you a fleshed out story as the chapter progresses.