they character development is this story major problem. there is hardly any character development in male MC parts and author also does not hint towards any future character development in male MC in his thoughts. other than this, author made male MC too stupid. I don't even have words to say anything about it. To me personally, this story feels like story of Alice and male MC other girls as the way author writes. Warning: anyone who hates simp or beta MC who are afraid of women and follow their orders like a dog, than this novel is not for you otherwise this novel could be considered good if author focus a bit more on above mentioned things. especially his way of writing as to me when I was reading it felt like he made female MCs the main protagonist and added male MC for cute moments of female MCs
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