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Qenam
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I didn’t read the story because reviews basically says even though MC is OP he basically act like a slave to his harem’s desire probably at some point if harem want to try something like ntr play by making MC watch it or something MC would agree without wanting it, my advice is make it so his harem start to get overbearing and unreasonable with their request and start to think it’s normal for MC to do what they want then make it so MC starts to get angry and snaps and leaves them for a while and at that time make it so harem start to regret it and meanwhile MC finds a few reasonable woman and then these new womans notice MC still loves his old harem but because he can’t bear to be a slave anymore he doesn’t want to go back and then these womans tells him he should give them one more chance because if they waste that chance too probably his love would start to vanish and if they don’t waste it and regret it and stop being unreasonable they would start a better and more reasonable relationship, and my advice at this point is make it so if there is some woman with trash personality at harem that you can’t bear to write anymore then make them not regret it and and MC leaves them completely and no longer loves them and make it so other womans regret it and won’t be unreasonable anymore and MC slowly accepts them again and from this point MC is no longer a beta MC but an alpha MC with new womans becoming equal with MC in their relationship but part of old harem that regrets it becomes like concubines at first and later equal too like new ones and if they start to act out of line and unreasonable again make it so new ones remind them what happened before and they remember and say sorry it’s a bit like a twist of sort but this way you can make it so MC is no longer a beta MC

NEW START IN NEW LIFE

NamanyaSiAldi

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Qenam
QenamLv4Qenam

Also i think you cangive him some bs willpower based power the moment he snaps so with stronger will he wont want to became slave again or something along the lines i think you already understood what i mean

NamanyaSiAldi
NamanyaSiAldiAuthorNamanyaSiAldi

Yeah, I kind of like this idea. Thanks really thank you, my man. I think I know what I should do with the way things are now. Really, thank you so much.

Qenam
QenamLv4Qenam

No need for thanks i was just getting frustrated because most op+harem mc became betas and slaves and all and just wanted to vent but because i don’t like being unreasonable it kind of became an advice

NamanyaSiAldi:Yeah, I kind of like this idea. Thanks really thank you, my man. I think I know what I should do with the way things are now. Really, thank you so much.
Neerai
NeeraiLv4Neerai

Wait is the mc really as he said ? or only a simp? also will there be any of the shit as the dude said because I'll rather not read if so can you please clarify

NamanyaSiAldi:Yeah, I kind of like this idea. Thanks really thank you, my man. I think I know what I should do with the way things are now. Really, thank you so much.
NamanyaSiAldi
NamanyaSiAldiAuthorNamanyaSiAldi

I guess you need to find out yourself. It wasn't fun for me to just tell you wether this is right or wrong right?

Neerai:Wait is the mc really as he said ? or only a simp? also will there be any of the shit as the dude said because I'll rather not read if so can you please clarify
Neerai
NeeraiLv4Neerai

Damn you are evil at least tell me if there is any or will be betrayal

NamanyaSiAldi:I guess you need to find out yourself. It wasn't fun for me to just tell you wether this is right or wrong right?
NamanyaSiAldi
NamanyaSiAldiAuthorNamanyaSiAldi

nah, they aren't for now.

Neerai:Damn you are evil at least tell me if there is any or will be betrayal
Neerai
NeeraiLv4Neerai

the 'for now' is not really appealing

NamanyaSiAldi:nah, they aren't for now.
QSHRS
QSHRSLv3QSHRS

The comments old but you do some betrayal you better say good bye to yer arms cause there mine now

Neerai:the 'for now' is not really appealing
Jay_Mark_Pacatang
Jay_Mark_PacatangLv1Jay_Mark_Pacatang

Yeah you are right it will add a little spice in the things