ssfx3yuchens here with honest review. Honestly I have to say I am quite taken with this story, it is relaxing and easy to read and understand, and the pacing is good. I enjoyed it a lot. In overall, there are a few noticeable grammatical errors in the beginning, but other than that, it's really good. The plotline looks promising[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
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LIKEI guess I'm a cultural writer. I joined webnovel thinking it was an Asian reading community. Since they're pretty much based in Asia
Jo_J:You write good, just think about greater audience scope ;)
but that doesn't mean they people from all over the world can not read your novel ;) think about it that way
ssfx3yuchens:Plus my book is written from Chinese mindset..
ssfx3yuchens:I guess I'm a cultural writer. I joined webnovel thinking it was an Asian reading community. Since they're pretty much based in Asia
it's written from an eastern point of view so they might not comprehend why the leads are thinking this way.
Jo_J:but that doesn't mean they people from all over the world can not read your novel ;) think about it that way