Review Detail of Traps_Are_Gay in Naruto: The Grey King

Writing Quality: 1 Story Development: 1 Character Design : 1 (Would give 0) Updating Stability : 3 World Background : 2 It's an existing world The story stats of good with a good idea nothing original but it was good and not over used. After chapter 8 or so it went downhill it's not AU but characters act so weird (the best I can describe) or out of character. The comedy is nonsensical and very cringe even the author knows it's cringe. The story is also nonsensical with very forced plots eg: Hisashi allowing Hinata to hang out with Naruto because she would "break his balls with a technique her mom taught her." That's just one of the many examples hopefully the author isn't a bitch like other and deletes a review he might not like.