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Review Detail of Djabilong in Harem System: An Implosion on This Wonderful World

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Djabilong
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(it's actually supposed to be 2,5~3 stars, but someone gotta balance things out when 20 reviews out of 50 were 5-star spammed by the exact same dude) So here's the rub - the beginning actually isn't that bad; but the further you delve, the worse it becomes. As if it wasn't enough to have a stereotypical dense japanese harem/isekai protag who gets pushed around by everyone in a kilometer radius, we also get Paimon playing as the system fairy. And if you think she was annoying in sourse material, just wait until you see her here - an annoying little shit (with IQ lower than Aqua's) that can read your mind, hates your guts, constantly blathers out all your thoughts and secrets to everyone around trying to ruin your relationships and reputation, steals from you, does nothing of use and serves no purpose apart from mooching off you while being overall an ungrateful piece of garbage. Never thought this day would come, but Umaru-bitсh finally has a competitor for the Worst Pile Of Filth Alive title. And if you thought that was bad, just wait until the actual world-hopping part starts after the first couple dozen chapters... Not gonna lie, it hurts. This is one of the rare occasions where you can see that author actually gave a shit and put in honest-to-god effort, but this just isn't good at all.

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Harem System: An Implosion on This Wonderful World

Geraint124x

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Geraint124x
Geraint124xAuthorGeraint124x

Author: (0x0) Paimon: "Sorry, Author. Looks like it's Paimon fault this time." Author: "Absolutely. You're grounded inside the pot for four years." Paimon:

Krisavq
KrisavqLv14Krisavq

oof, I like it author, it's one of the only storys where I can turn off my mind and relax

Geraint124x:Author: (0x0) Paimon: "Sorry, Author. Looks like it's Paimon fault this time." Author: "Absolutely. You're grounded inside the pot for four years." Paimon:
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TheNormalMan
TheNormalManLv13TheNormalMan

49 times the same person reviewed

It_Does_Matters
It_Does_MattersLv5It_Does_Matters

FOX_ZRS :

Geraint124x
Geraint124xAuthorGeraint124x

thank you for counting.

TheNormalMan:49 times the same person reviewed
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rizarima
rizarimaLv3rizarima

will you erase paimon to atom if we vote it?

Geraint124x:Author: (0x0) Paimon: "Sorry, Author. Looks like it's Paimon fault this time." Author: "Absolutely. You're grounded inside the pot for four years." Paimon:
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America_Yea
America_YeaLv3America_Yea

Jus gonna point out that the average score on this site is right around 4.2 and that most of the top novels have been review bombed like that but whatevs vote how ya like I guess.

N0_Hope
N0_HopeLv2N0_Hope

Thanks for the advise... It's always good to avoid trash fanfics.

Yum_q327
Yum_q327Lv1Yum_q327

In fact, the first 20 chapters were great, but after Paimon appeared, something went wrong. Unlike the original cute and super cute Paimon, here we have some kind of nasty and annoying fairy with her appearance, but it's not only about Paimon, after 20 chapters, all the work and trust that the author has earned disappears abruptly, as if the author was replaced