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Abubububu
AbubububuLv33yrAbubububu

(I used Google Translate) It is disappointing how the expectations that are created are not matched. First, even though I understand respect for the family, he carries her on his back and does everything, and when he leaves, it seems that everything depends on him. The impression is that he doesn't have fun or is a child, when his "out of this world" goal was to relax. Then Megumin is about to learn Explosion, but the MC says nothing and lets her waste potential, following Cannon. Afterwards, he is transported to Owari's world, but he doesn't know and takes time to find out, as if the system didn't exist. Then he goes to Fairy Tail to save Erza from the Tower of Heaven, where it seems that he will solve everything easily, but he rolls up and becomes nothing but useless, only to end up with her, leaving the others to be slaves, because " Ultar has owned Jellal and will blow up all runaway children on the ship ". Wasn't he powerful? . I stopped reading because I feel that I am only disappointed. For those who like Cannon to be followed, but with one more character and making jokes with references, it's for you. Another positive point is the existence of other POV's, in addition to the characters being similar, as to personality, with the originals. I don't know if the MC will mature later on, but for me I stopped. Ah, besides that the fairy that he receives and accompanies him is useless, that does not fulfill his duty, just to be reading his thoughts and subconscious, besides eating food.

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Harem System: An Implosion on This Wonderful World

Geraint124x

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Geraint124x
Geraint124xAuthorGeraint124x

Well, the next part was all of them was able to escape because of the fluke plan of Harukin. At that time, I realized that writing with following the canon is really hard than making it a little bit original. But when I writing the fairy tail part, All I think is where will I put Jojo Reference. But thanks for reading anyway.👍👍👍

Abubububu
AbubububuLv3Abubububu

ooooh. Knowing this, I will read again. I was hasty in abandoning, as there seemed to be no changes, but I will read again to redo the criticism and not harm his work

Abubububu
AbubububuLv3Abubububu

Hey guys. I already reviewed the review in another post. But I can say that the work has improved a lot

Ototsu_Yume
Ototsu_YumeLv10Ototsu_Yume

That makes me sad, I enjoyed this novel up to chapter 100 or so but those references just became too much and just couldn't do it anymore. :( Why the need to use the same meme over and over again? It was funny the first few times but it got to the point you were using half a dozen of them or so each chapter.

Geraint124x:Well, the next part was all of them was able to escape because of the fluke plan of Harukin. At that time, I realized that writing with following the canon is really hard than making it a little bit original. But when I writing the fairy tail part, All I think is where will I put Jojo Reference. But thanks for reading anyway.👍👍👍
Geraint124x
Geraint124xAuthorGeraint124x

Okay, I lessen it in the future chapters.

Ototsu_Yume:That makes me sad, I enjoyed this novel up to chapter 100 or so but those references just became too much and just couldn't do it anymore. :( Why the need to use the same meme over and over again? It was funny the first few times but it got to the point you were using half a dozen of them or so each chapter.
Veasna_TDM
Veasna_TDMLv11Veasna_TDM

After 2 years how is this fan-fic? I just want to know weather it gonna be a fanfic where everything is following the original plot with just 1 extra character? or is it like an original plot where other anime character got put in? I respect author to not deleted all the negative review holding the top position, it turn me off at first, but i'm gonna give it a try since it konosuba fan-fic.

Geraint124x:Okay, I lessen it in the future chapters.