Review Detail of Lucien121 in The Abandoned Hunter

honestly the plot armour in the beginning is way to much i mean if it was extended maybe add a couple of brush strokes here and there so to speak so its not just dragon"grrr ima eat you i scence power in you" jay" oh noooo" .dragon"ill give you a last wish what is it" jay "well i had wished to be the strongest but your gonna eat me" dragon"your now my Canadat i choose you jaychu jay*proceeds to power up* not joking went about like that i mean its just it doesnt feel right it doesnt feel good its there to be there and i feel like my brain cells died later you find out about the fake taxey driver but still its like well ok then whatever after all the other plot armour but most will abandon it before then ima read some more im alittle past 60 as of right now ill comment if i keep reading it if not ill just leave it here